Mikayla Sanders(finished)

[angel]

Name:Mikayla Sanders
Age:21
Gender:Female
Type of Being:human
Diet preference:n/a(shes human)

Power:n/a

Likes:

dancing
boys
parties
shopping
frienda
being popular

Dislikes:
(dont have any yet but i will think of some later)

Physical description:Mikayla is considered to be beautiful,she has dark brown hair,brown eyes.Shes about 5'8 or 9.Shes quite tall.Shes also has a good figure cause of all the cheerleading she did in high school.

Personality descritpion:Mikayla is extremly beautiful alot of girls are jealous of her.She loves being the centre of attention.Since kindergatern she has always been popular.he also has great fashion sense she knows whats hot and whats not.

Historÿ:Mikayla being the only child in her family she knows that she has always been spoilt and she never cared what anyone else thought about her they were just jealous of her cause she had everything.

It all started when her parents divorced when she was 5 years old she hated it,then her parents remarried and it got worse.But when she was with her friends she had a different life.Growing up Mikayla always kept fit and healthy with herself she did gymnastics,ballet and when she was in high school she became a cheerleader,and she became popular.

Mikayla also has a great fashion sense she wants to be a fashion designer one day.All the clothes she wears she made herself

Mikayla is now living with her mom and her husband who she hasnt yeat called him dad its just not the same without both her parents in her life she hates seeing them fight all the time and using lawyers.

Do you plan on having your character transformed at a later date:yes
Does your character know explicitly about the supernatural beings:no(not yet)

Did you read the rules:yes i did

[Marcus]

Ok, there are many problems with this application. First of all, none of the sections are long enough, except maybe the history, but even that is choppy. Second of all, you obviously didn't use the template, because you're missing the RP sample. Third, EVERYONE has dislikes, even if it's just bugs or something. Fourth, this quote:

Mikayla is extremly beautiful alot of girls are jealous of her.

gives me the feeling that you're aiming for a perfect, amazing, beautiful, awesome girl that all the boys love and all the girls want to be, etc. This is basically the definition of a Mary Sue (Google it if you don't know what it is), and we don't allow those type of characters. If your character is going to be awesome and beautiful, she'd better have some serious flaws.

Finally, and most importantly, I can tell from your app that you DID NOT, in fact read the rules. I suggest you go check those out.

So for now, I'm moving your profile to the Disapproved Profiles folder. Feel free to edit your profile and have us reevaluate it. No need to start a new thread or post, simply edit the above and PM an admin when you've edited it.