Post by Edward Cullen on Mar 9, 2010 15:26:17 GMT -5
Cannon
My Character: Edward Cullen (Edward Anthony Masen)
Real age: 108
Apparent age (if a vampire): 17
Gender: Male
Type of being: Vampire
Diet preference: Veggie
Power: Edward is a mind reader he is also the fastest vampire in the Olympic Coven.
About the Character: [Ok your character sheet confuses me so I’ll break it into Personality and History with Italics I hope this is ok it helps me get a better feel for the character also appearance]
Appearance
Edward has angular features which Bella often thinks of as looking like the Greek God Adonis. Little does he know that, he has high cheekbones, a strong jawline he doesn't realize just how attracting those features are. His hair is still the red it was in life but it also still retains the bronzen shade it had in life, he is very aware of that fact his skin is cold and like marble which is just like other Vampires of his kind. His eyes vary in shade based on how hungry he is, he often has golden eyes but also sometimes has black ones.
Personality
Edward can be broken down into a few words that describe his personality best. These words are charming, polite, determined and very stubborn.
The charming aspect comes in how he treats those he cares about especially Bella, whom he tries his best to please and care about in more ways than one. He also protects his daughter Reneesmee, he tries to be charming with her as well. His charm is only used on those old enough to understand it so he tries not to on Reneesme his daughter.
The polite aspect of his personality, he always uses manners and things he was taught as a human. He also has respect for thos that are not like him so he does his best to be polite to them. He is also polite because he will not eat anything that someone owns.
His determination is shown in how he will do all he can to protect his family, the entire coven. He also is determined to find out the source of this new army that threatens his family. He will let no one harm his daughter, she is to precios to him so he has even more termination to protect.
His stubborness is best shown in how he chooses to try and protect his family and learn all he can. He even knows now that he can read Reneeseme's mind so he is fine with that. He now tries to put all his skills into learning all he can about his family.
History
Born in 1901, he grew up like any child of his time and was soon at the age of seventeen in the year 1918. When he and his entire family got the Spanish Influenza, his father died then soon after his mother followed suit. He did not know this until after Carlisle had come and told him everything about that. He was taken from the hospital and turned into a vampire.
For ten years he stays with Carlisle understanding all that he was teaching, but eventually he got fed up and left Carlisle for a while. He took off and then he began to try and feed on people, he thought that if he helped and only hunted the evil people he would be all right. But it didn't work for one year he tried this, but it all failed so he then had fled back to Carlisle. It wasn't long before others were brought into the coven.
He continued to grow and develop it was in his one hundred and fourth year that he met Isabella Swan. He had smelled her once and it had been hard not to attack and bite her. She was so pleasing so tantilizing to him that he held back and simply let it go, he fought and then they began to fall for each other. He let it go and simply chose to fight for her to remain human, but he didn't get that wish and Bella was convinced she wanted to join him.
She did get that wish but before that he had gotten her with child, thankfully she was still human at the time. During the birth he got Renesmee out and he had injected his venom into her heart making her an immortal Vampire. He still feels badly about having to do that.
Creativity
Secrets: What he wishes to do to the Volturi
Wishing to Kill the Wolves
All of his feelings for Bella and Renesmee
Dislikes most domestic pets (dogs, cats and the like)
Writing Sample: Edward stood out front of his home and looked around, he was pleased that his daughter was coming along as she was. But he was worried about what he would do about the coming attackers and this army, was it the Volturi again trying to get him and his wife to join them? He let a growl rip through his body as he thought of them trying to take his wife and daughter from him, let them try he thought as he looked around a bit.
"I wonder what I'll do if they try to hurt Reneesme, I know I'd try and rip apart anyone that tried to harm her but still I need to be careful." He mused aloud as he continued looking rage in his eyes and irritation in his stance. He hoped that Bella would not come out of the house until he was calm again, he hated showing her his anger it made him feel all the more horrible about it.
Did you read the rules?: "I’ve never seen anyone so prone to life-threatening idiocy."
My Character: Edward Cullen (Edward Anthony Masen)
Real age: 108
Apparent age (if a vampire): 17
Gender: Male
Type of being: Vampire
Diet preference: Veggie
Power: Edward is a mind reader he is also the fastest vampire in the Olympic Coven.
About the Character: [Ok your character sheet confuses me so I’ll break it into Personality and History with Italics I hope this is ok it helps me get a better feel for the character also appearance]
Appearance
Edward has angular features which Bella often thinks of as looking like the Greek God Adonis. Little does he know that, he has high cheekbones, a strong jawline he doesn't realize just how attracting those features are. His hair is still the red it was in life but it also still retains the bronzen shade it had in life, he is very aware of that fact his skin is cold and like marble which is just like other Vampires of his kind. His eyes vary in shade based on how hungry he is, he often has golden eyes but also sometimes has black ones.
Personality
Edward can be broken down into a few words that describe his personality best. These words are charming, polite, determined and very stubborn.
The charming aspect comes in how he treats those he cares about especially Bella, whom he tries his best to please and care about in more ways than one. He also protects his daughter Reneesmee, he tries to be charming with her as well. His charm is only used on those old enough to understand it so he tries not to on Reneesme his daughter.
The polite aspect of his personality, he always uses manners and things he was taught as a human. He also has respect for thos that are not like him so he does his best to be polite to them. He is also polite because he will not eat anything that someone owns.
His determination is shown in how he will do all he can to protect his family, the entire coven. He also is determined to find out the source of this new army that threatens his family. He will let no one harm his daughter, she is to precios to him so he has even more termination to protect.
His stubborness is best shown in how he chooses to try and protect his family and learn all he can. He even knows now that he can read Reneeseme's mind so he is fine with that. He now tries to put all his skills into learning all he can about his family.
History
Born in 1901, he grew up like any child of his time and was soon at the age of seventeen in the year 1918. When he and his entire family got the Spanish Influenza, his father died then soon after his mother followed suit. He did not know this until after Carlisle had come and told him everything about that. He was taken from the hospital and turned into a vampire.
For ten years he stays with Carlisle understanding all that he was teaching, but eventually he got fed up and left Carlisle for a while. He took off and then he began to try and feed on people, he thought that if he helped and only hunted the evil people he would be all right. But it didn't work for one year he tried this, but it all failed so he then had fled back to Carlisle. It wasn't long before others were brought into the coven.
He continued to grow and develop it was in his one hundred and fourth year that he met Isabella Swan. He had smelled her once and it had been hard not to attack and bite her. She was so pleasing so tantilizing to him that he held back and simply let it go, he fought and then they began to fall for each other. He let it go and simply chose to fight for her to remain human, but he didn't get that wish and Bella was convinced she wanted to join him.
She did get that wish but before that he had gotten her with child, thankfully she was still human at the time. During the birth he got Renesmee out and he had injected his venom into her heart making her an immortal Vampire. He still feels badly about having to do that.
Creativity
Secrets: What he wishes to do to the Volturi
Wishing to Kill the Wolves
All of his feelings for Bella and Renesmee
Dislikes most domestic pets (dogs, cats and the like)
Writing Sample: Edward stood out front of his home and looked around, he was pleased that his daughter was coming along as she was. But he was worried about what he would do about the coming attackers and this army, was it the Volturi again trying to get him and his wife to join them? He let a growl rip through his body as he thought of them trying to take his wife and daughter from him, let them try he thought as he looked around a bit.
"I wonder what I'll do if they try to hurt Reneesme, I know I'd try and rip apart anyone that tried to harm her but still I need to be careful." He mused aloud as he continued looking rage in his eyes and irritation in his stance. He hoped that Bella would not come out of the house until he was calm again, he hated showing her his anger it made him feel all the more horrible about it.
Did you read the rules?: "I’ve never seen anyone so prone to life-threatening idiocy."
